tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post5895084341535582094..comments2019-09-13T02:22:51.394-07:00Comments on Karen's Make Believe World: BeautifulKaren M. Petersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06972093977468313631noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-79601787057573734002011-06-20T05:45:21.995-07:002011-06-20T05:45:21.995-07:00Hey Karen, you are the winner of my book giveaway,...Hey Karen, you are the winner of my book giveaway, yay!<br />email me your address at cris.dossantos@yahoo.com<br /><br />thank you so much for participating :)Cristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15064636500827230911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-9747040969501638962011-06-18T17:00:36.709-07:002011-06-18T17:00:36.709-07:00You are going on with this story, right?
Well don...You are going on with this story, right? <br />Well done for "thrown together". <br />Love the description of him and her insecurities.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-32089875668325945912011-06-18T13:08:01.465-07:002011-06-18T13:08:01.465-07:00I love how she closed the door without even lettin...I love how she closed the door without even letting it open enough to see who he IS.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-85120074517366827622011-06-18T00:06:26.332-07:002011-06-18T00:06:26.332-07:00I would be curious to see where you might take thi...I would be curious to see where you might take this next...to see if her gut reaction turns out to be correct. He seems engaged enough that something might happen, but would she sabotage it????? Tune in tomorrow........maybe?Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03485338098212307793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-60810950429722708692011-06-17T13:24:12.649-07:002011-06-17T13:24:12.649-07:00Definitely pretty great writing for just throwing ...Definitely pretty great writing for just throwing something out there. Lol. Love the ending. She's too self conscious and he's too pretty. It's great! Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-71045743144371179002011-06-17T11:02:58.585-07:002011-06-17T11:02:58.585-07:00i adore a good love story and so hope this one pla...i adore a good love story and so hope this one plays out! <br /><br />I liked how concise you were and how easily the piece flowed between descriptions and inner thoughts.Galit Breenhttp://theselittlewaves.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-23321956085894348352011-06-17T09:00:56.354-07:002011-06-17T09:00:56.354-07:00Glad to see someone trying to get back in the habi...Glad to see someone trying to get back in the habit of posting...and if this is thrown together, I can't wait to see more. <br />One thing confused me...blonde curls, and brown hair? <br />At first I thought she was very secure and disinterested, and then you threw in the twist...very interesting. Look forward to seeing more from you.Writerly Wanna Behttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00034679656184476657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-55402699756248427882011-06-17T08:09:39.610-07:002011-06-17T08:09:39.610-07:00ahh the story of my life....except I go on dates w...ahh the story of my life....except I go on dates with ugly insecure men! haha. great writing!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01640871678908297706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-70725915258703478722011-06-17T07:35:27.442-07:002011-06-17T07:35:27.442-07:00her insecurity is heartbreaking. He saw her pictur...her insecurity is heartbreaking. He saw her picture too. Maybe he sees past what she sees as flaws.<br /><br />I hope April gives him a chance. I think he might actually ditch her more for being inattentive and distracted than not physically attractive.<br /><br />visiting from RDCCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-6644210845121903862011-06-17T07:26:36.726-07:002011-06-17T07:26:36.726-07:00Agh--we've all had moments like this. You are ...Agh--we've all had moments like this. You are taking me back to the world of dating, the insecurities--don't want to go there. Great job for something you just threw together.<br /><br />Cheers.<br />VBKerry Ann @Vinobaby's Voicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295304663766870450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-87398357809731543442011-06-17T07:14:36.992-07:002011-06-17T07:14:36.992-07:00This is soooooo what I did with Hubby haha (minus...This is soooooo what I did with Hubby haha (minus the blond curls)<br />I figured that a man THIS good looking would NEVER be with someone like me...<br />Great job!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4216836542001073732.post-89399656111476732572011-06-17T05:51:27.457-07:002011-06-17T05:51:27.457-07:00For something you just threw together-this is pret...For something you just threw together-this is pretty terrific writing! <br />This poor girl-it looks like insecurity and self doubt have reared their ugly heads once again-they will ruin her chance for true love more than a million crooked teeth:)Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.com