Where I write about the stuff that happens to the people that live in my brain.
Oo! Very good - I find myself yelling in my head: "Run that Light, dammit!"Excellent reaction in your reader!
Yes run the red and risk the ticket! Scary.
Run the light! Escape or bring the cops into it! :>
at a time like that, I think running the red is justified.
Makes me wonder what kind of monster she's running from or did she cause the stir?
Go...I keeping yelling GO!
I hope you run that red light!
I'm with the rest of the commenters. Run the light! If nothing else, it could help get the cops involved.Good job!
Nice! Nothing is worse than being stuck at a red light when you're in a hurry - except being stuck at a red light when a homicidal maniac is after you! :-)
I'm with everyone else - RUN THE LIGHT!! The fact that we are all saying it and it's still not happening makes it even scarier for me, somehow! I guess it's like the phenomenon that happens when you watch a horror film with a bunch of screaming people - that just makes me jump even more!!And, please, for future reference, please promise me if YOU are ever in this situation you will RUN THE LIGHT!!!;)
Now, that's chilling. If I were her, I'd be out of there! This is so good...and scary.
hit the gas girlfriend!!!! Oh my, I could feel the urgency!
Run the light,woman! Now!Good job.
Whoa!! I'd definitely be panicking in that situation. I'm such a rule follower, too. I don't know that I could run the light!
You can feel her fear and anxiety. I would lose the word "Why" and just get to "he's coming." Nice job.
This is why I always avoid eye contact with other drivers. You never know...
I'd be hitting the gas, believe me! Good job.
Ooh- love the quick switch from condo to terror.It made me jump!
I am with everyone. Who cares about the red light! Just drive. Love the switch from normal to panic with one line He's coming back.
That had to be the longest light for her... fear & anxiety all in one.
Shit!! Run sweetie. Run!
Good job, very scary!
This has to be one of the scariest texts ever! I say run that light too!!
Stalking you - uh, I mean, following you over here via A to Z 'coz I write fiction too!
Definitely run the light!
Creeeepy! I'd be running the red light, or trying to depending on traffic :P
SCARY! Awesome job.
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